Creative Writing
"I'm sorry," her voice was broken by her tears, "I'm so, so sorry!"
Is that line written properly, or would you write it like [ "I'm sorry." Her voice was broken by her tears. "I'm so, so sorry!"]
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The line is written properly as it is. The punctuation and narrative flow gives the impression that the character has paused to cry before saying the last line. It suggests the magnitude of her apology and her emotions while speaking.
